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The Sping Festival

2015级(7)班[毕业] 姚逸轩 2016-01-26 19:26 阅读(238) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:讲了我在春节做的事情

Hello!My name is Caesar.The Sping Festival is coming .In the morning ,I always with my parents visit my grangparents .I get a lot of red envelopes and I very happy!
In the afternoon,I play the computer games.My parents and grandparents are play the mahjong.In the evening.We have family reunion dinner and after that,we watch the Spring Festival Gala. I excited!

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教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/27 13:11:57 
的确,两个in the morning
同学:曾泳发 评论于 2016/1/26 19:43:01 
第三句话前后矛盾,不信,自己读一读。