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the  spring   festival

2015级(7)班[毕业] 王晓晴 2016-01-27 13:15 阅读(182) 评论(4) 英语作文
作文概要:主要写了在春节到来之前的一些活动和感受。
Hi , my name is sandy , The spring festival is coming , I often buy some candy and food on the day with my parents . I spring festival very much , because i can buy some nice clothes and i can get some money .Haha , I am happy .
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同学:姚逸轩 评论于 2016/1/28 14:49:59 
名字sandy要大写吧,改成Hi,my name is Sandy
教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/27 13:18:07 
I feel very happy… is 是干嘛的?
教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/27 13:17:35 
very like什么鬼?应该是like… very much…
教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/27 13:16:59 
标题都少了一个S