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2015级(8)班[毕业] 周滔 2016-01-27 13:41 阅读(149) 评论(2) 英语作文
Hello,I am lenka.Let me tell you some thing about my shopping.This weekend ,I think it very boring.I want to shopping.Then I call my good friend.He want to shopping,too.We together go to the supermarket.What about your shopping.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/27 17:10:04 
写的太烂了,最好重写,什么叫I want to shopping啊?to后面➕原形的,而且购物叫做go shopping
教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/27 13:48:36 
boring也能被你写成bring…