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2015级(8)班[毕业] 黄晓林 2016-01-28 15:37 阅读(197) 评论(2) 英语作文
Hello! I'm Carol. Spring Festival is comming.I go to the store with my mother and buy some new clothes. My mother buy me a new trousers. It's 65 yuan.My mother buy a nice coat for brother. It's 75 yuan.My mother buy a pair of boots for my sister. They are 99 yuan.After then,we have a little tired. And I have a little hungry. I ask my mother:“ can yuo buy somethings give I eat?"My mother say:“Sure!"And then,we also buy some bread and some apples,pears.The bread aer 13 yuan.The apples,pears total are 40 yuan.We are so happy and relaxing for this shopping. Do yuo like going shopping? What do you want to buy in shopping?
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教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/28 20:34:04 
然后we are happy是没问题的,we are relaxing却是错的…要用relaxed…
教师:莫然 评论于 2016/1/28 20:33:26 
不错