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The Spring Festival

2015级(7)班[毕业] 姚舒丹 2016-02-13 16:45 阅读(166) 评论(1) 英语作文
作文概要:描述了我在过完春节后,回忆新春期间,所做过的一些活动及感想。
Hi!I'm Yodi.Today is February 13th.The Spring Festival is over.Let me tell you tell you something about my Spring Festival.In the morning,my family are went to visit my grandparents.After lunch,we also went shopping together.We bought a red jacket for my grandfather,and bought a red coat for my grandmother.In the evening,we ate dinner together. We had a good time!
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教师:莫然 评论于 2016/2/13 21:25:03 
到底有没有看我的评论啊?之前才批评了你动词前面不要加个are…现在还是如此…