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2011级(7)班[毕业] 黄鸿泰 2012-02-09 17:53 阅读(263) 评论(1) 英语作文
  I live in shiling.I was bron on ctoher 27th 1998 in shilong.There is a long rivr in frurrt of my home.There is a pork next to my home.There is a square near the pork.There is a bus stop hehimd m home.There is a supermaket ner m home,I like my home town
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/2/10 13:33:33 
很多单词错误呢...但是文章的结构不错,很连贯