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2015级(8)班[毕业] 邓诗淇 2016-07-23 17:01 阅读(148) 评论(1) 诗词鉴赏
作文概要:On my holiday. I and my parents with my young borther.We were took a piane to the ShenYang.
On my holiday. I and my parents with my young borther.We were took a piane to the ShenYang.There were many snow.I with my borther played snow very happyed.It also was ZhangXueliang and his father,s hometown,and leaved in DaShuaifu The DaShuaifu.The DaShaifu was very big and beautifully .We were did some sightseeing and took many photos in there.After seven days,we were came back home in the afternoon.January 13th,we were had a great trip and we were very happyed.
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同学:黄佩舒 评论于 2016/8/21 13:37:19 
I and my parents with my young borther.改成Myparents,my young borther and I