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2009级（7）班[毕业] 张洁莹 2012-02-09 20:40 阅读(235) 评论(3) 英语作文

My name is zhang jieying, I’m 14 years old, I am in Class 7, Grade 9 in the No.2 Middle School. I have black eyes, long hair. I am tall and slim. I’m a sunny、friendly girl. I have a lot of hobbies. Such as drawing pictures, reading books, doing exercises……I like reading, because it called me lots of about would. I like water, it is very cool!But I can’t swim.
This is me, do you know?

教师：何四华评论于 2012/2/10 19:12:50: ... I can't swimming should be changed into swim.
作者回复：Thank you ,I would change~~

教师：何四华评论于 2012/2/10 19:12:07: Hair is an uncountalbe noun, hairs should be changed into hair.