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My  good  eating  habit

2016级(7)班[毕业] 张康鑫 2017-01-12 18:18 阅读(416) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:good  eating  habit
                                                     
    My  name Tom . Iam  12. I have good  eating  habits  .I  like  bread  and  eggs  for      breadfast .l  don't  like  mike  .For  lunch  .l  like  chicken  and  vegetables   .  l  don't  like  hamburgers  .Because  it  is  not  healthy  For  dinner  .l  like  riceand  fish  .l  don't   like  ice  cream  .Because  l  don't  want  to  be  fat  .

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同学:刘智聪 评论于 2017/1/15 22:03:54 
Hi!my name is Tom!I am mike!I have good eating habits!For breafts,I like mike、bread.The mike is good.so,I like it.Fof lunch,I like rice and salad.For dinner,I like chicken、fish and noodles.I have healhy eating habits,so I am very tall and healhy.what about you?
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2017/1/12 19:43:45 
个别小错误,整体很不错👌