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My        friend

2016级(7)班[毕业] 黄嘉馨 2017-01-13 20:16 阅读(145) 评论(1) 英语作文
作文概要:       My     friend     is      a       good       gril      and       student.
Hello,I am Cindy. I have a good friend. Her name is Gina. Her favorite subjust is history. She like swimming best. She have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, she have chicken and salad. For supper, she have beef and vegetables. She is a good student. What about your friend? Can you tell me?
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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2017/1/13 20:53:08 
内容不错👌但有几处语法有误,及一个拼写错误。建议发表前认真审阅修改,把你的最佳作品分享给大家。