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2016级(8)班[毕业] 赖琪怡 2017-01-13 20:18 阅读(154) 评论(2) 英语作文
Hi,my name is Tim.I have a big family.They are my parents,my grandparents,my brother,and me.My mother and father likes sports,My grandparents often watch TV in my home.My brother and I in the same school.He likes play ping-pong with his classmate.And me too.What about you?
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同学:张航 评论于 2017/1/14 18:25:31 
写的好,最后一句话反问别人,让文章有了感情,好
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2017/1/13 20:48:46 
不错👌,仅有两个小错误,希望你自己发现或其他同学帮忙找出来一起改正