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2016级(7)班[毕业] 张颖 2017-01-14 15:31 阅读(145) 评论(3) 诗词鉴赏
      Hi.My name is Nancy.I have a big family.There are my parents,my grandparents          
and my brother.My mother's name is Jenny.She is a worker.My father's name is Tom.        He is an engineer.My brother is a student.His name is Peter.His favorite color is green.      I love my family.                    

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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2017/1/16 20:43:51 
Good!
同学:时安琪 评论于 2017/1/15 13:27:17 
This composition is very good!Your family are happy.I can feel.Fighting!
同学:王宝霞 评论于 2017/1/14 19:36:08 
写的不错,有水平,很好。Very good.