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2016级(10)班[毕业] 黄一宸 2017-01-14 18:44 阅读(167) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:讲述我的家人的职业和爱好
  I have a happy family.My father,my mother,my brother and I.They are my most love the person.My father is a factory manager.My mother is a accounting.And my brother is a student of grade three in high school.My father likes playing soccer ball,so he is healthy and strong.My mother likes cooking,so she is good woman.My brother likes running,so he is healthy.What do I like?I like play computer and read books.I usually play computer and read books for a long time,so I have poor eyesight.I love my family.
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同学:黄一宸 评论于 2017/1/16 9:42:01 
我认为我这篇文章的第二段不应该用I(主格),应该用me(宾格)
同学:肖可可 评论于 2017/1/14 21:35:40