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2016级(4)班[毕业] 徐兆昌 2017-01-16 13:14 阅读(142) 评论(1) 诗词鉴赏
Ihaveawarmfamily.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,mymotherandI.Myfatherworksinabigcompany.Hegoestowardeveryday.Heworkshard.Mymotherisadoctor,sheworkinahospital.Sheoftengoestoworkatnight.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.Istudydiligently.Ilovemyfamily.
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同学:黄韵宁 评论于 2017/1/16 13:19:15 
你写作文的时候应该要空格啊亲,如果不空格的话容易造成错误,下次要改正哦~