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2016级(9)班[毕业] 谢楚东 2017-01-16 14:05 阅读(135) 评论(1) 英语作文
   Hi!I am Jordan.Look!This is a photo of my family.My family have five people.This is my sister.She is cute.She is 11 years old.She is 1.61 metres.They are my parents.My father is a doctor.My mother is a nurse.They usually run at 6:00.They are healthy.My brother is good boy.He is kind.He like cobra.He think cobra is cool.I am a handsome boy.I am 1.78 metres.I have a happy family.
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同学:陈鸿 评论于 2017/2/8 11:27:18 
注意语法,第五句的“My family”属于第三人称单数,所以“have”应该改成“has”