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2016级(4)班[毕业] 李凡星 2017-01-17 10:24 阅读(164) 评论(2) 英语作文
Hi!I am John.I have a happy family. My family have five poeple:grandpa, grandma, father, mother, and me.
My grandparents live in countryside. They have six rooms. The room is big. There are two apple in the ground. They have sixteen goats and three cows. The goat is white. The cow is yellow. They are healthy. My parents and me live in city. My father is a worker. His work is hard. My mother is a high school's Chinese teacher, She take bicycle go to work at seven'clock. In the afternoon, she doesn't go home. In the evening, she make supper. The food is delicious. I am a student. I have Chinese, math and English everyday. That is boring. I have many friends. After class, I play with my friends. We are tried, but we are very happy. I love my family
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同学:李凡星 评论于 2017/1/17 10:43:54 
好,知道了,我下次一定会好好注意的
同学:聂继媛 评论于 2017/1/17 10:33:58 
At seven o'clock是这样写的,还有最后记得加上标点符号,介绍家人是可以用There be句型介绍,下次注意一下这些小问题!O(∩_∩)O~