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2016级(4)班[毕业] 叶缊瑶 2017-01-17 10:49 阅读(181) 评论(2) 英语作文
My name is Alice.I am 12 years old.There are four people in my family.They are my father,my mother,my brother and me.My father is a doctor.He is tall and strong.He likes playing basketball.My mother is a teacher.She likes watching TV.She often plays with us.My brother and I are students.We are in different school.He is younger than me.I have a happy family.What about you?
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同学:聂继媛 评论于 2017/1/17 10:53:11 
She often play with us.的play要加s,还有than是这样写的,其他写的很好,继续努力,↖(^ω^)↗!
作者回复:下次会注意的!