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My Best Friend

2016级(4)班[毕业] 李凡星 2017-01-17 11:06 阅读(142) 评论(1) 英语作文
I'm John.My best friend is Tom.He is 12 years old.He is a handsome boy.He is tall and has a medium build.His hair is short black and straight.We always play together.He is friendly and funny boy.He always helps others.When I get into a trouble he always helps me.That is my best friend Tom.
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同学:聂继媛 评论于 2017/1/17 11:22:35 
第5句and后面的主语he要加上去,He is friendly and funny boy.”要么去掉boy,要么加一个a,↖(^ω^)↗!