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2016级(4)班[毕业] 詹灿佳 2017-01-18 10:23 阅读(141) 评论(1) 英语作文
I have a good family. There are 5 people in my family.There are my father,my mother,my brother,my baby sister and me. My father is The boss. My mother is a teacher.My brother and me are student. My baby sister don't have a work. I love my family
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同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/18 13:56:37 
你要注意一下一些问题,there are my father ....应该改为they are,还有my father is the boss ,应该为my father is a boss,还有My brother and me are student.应该me为I,还有一个问题My baby sister don't have a work.的don‘t要改为doesn’t