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My Favorite Sport

2009级(11)班[毕业] 苏兆丰 2012-02-10 12:11 阅读(325) 评论(1) 英语作文
     I like sports very much, such as running, skating, playing basketball. But swimming is my favorite sport .

  When I was six years old, my parents often took me to a swimming pool . They taught me how to swim. They told me not to be afraid of water , and told me to jump into water bravely. Later I became very interesting in swimming. Swimming is really very interesting .If you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish . Great fun. .I'm sure you will feel very happy. And the most important thing is , if you swim, you’ll be strong.

  By the way, I took part in the swimming match last week in our town.?I?was the winner. Dear friends, swimming is really very good for us. Let’s enjoy swimming .

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教师:邓长青 评论于 2012/2/10 19:54:21 
紧扣主题,内容充实,语句通顺,可读性强。只是 became interesting in swimming中的interesting应该用interested。总之,这是一篇用心写的作文,质量不错。