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The Spring Festival

2016级（8）班[毕业] 赖琪怡 2017-01-21 20:24 阅读(119) 评论(1) 英语作文

Hi.I am Tom. The Spring Festival is good holiday in China.That day.I go to my brother home play with my brother.We play computer games is very well.It's interesting.My parents with my grandparents or my uncle and aunt go shopping.I like Spring Festival best.

教师：谢七妹评论于 2017/1/30 19:58:52: 中间有2句结构比较混乱。这是修改后的Hi.I am Tom. The Spring Festival is good holiday in China.That day, I go to my brother's home to play with my brother.We play computer games very well.It's interesting.My parents with my grandparents or my uncle and aunt go shopping.