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2016级(4)班[毕业] 彭子雄 2017-01-21 20:30 阅读(166) 评论(1) 英语作文
    Hello, I am jack. I am 13 years old. This is my friend. His name is Li Ming. He is 13 years old too. He like histore very much. Because he think histore is fun. He like eat ice crean. Me 
too.He is No.3 Middle school student. I'm No.2 Middle school.
    This is my best frient. Ilike him.
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同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/23 18:24:15 
第一行的too前面要加逗号 还有第一段的最后两句应该为he is a no3 middle school student,i am in ....