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2016级(4)班[毕业] 何芯卉 2017-01-24 13:28 阅读(142) 评论(4) 英语作文
    Hi I am He Xinhui. Everone people has a happy family. My father,mother,my tow sisters,and me. My father is fat and kind. My mother is so kind too. Oh,Where is my little sister?HaHa,She is under the table. She's so cut. She's 2 yes old. And the other sister's a sungirl. She's 17 yes old. I'm 12 yes old. I love my family.  
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同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/28 16:21:11 
sungirl要加空格
同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/28 16:21:06 
She's 17 yes old. I'm 12 yes old.同前面一样
同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/28 16:20:56 
还有可爱是这样写cute,She's 2 yes old.的yes是这样写的years,
同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/28 16:20:41 
Hi I am He Xinhui.hi的后面要加逗号,还有everyone是这样写的,Everone people has a happy family.应该用have,还有two是这样写的,