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2016级（4）班[毕业] 何芯卉 2017-01-24 14:19 阅读(148) 评论(3) 英语作文

Hi I'm He Xinhui. I'm 12 yes old. I learn in Shi Long NO.2 middle school. My favorite day is monday. Err.....My favorite subject is English and maths. My English teacher is MsZhang. She's vere kind. My maths teather is MsLiang. She's strict. And monday has PE class. My sports performance is one of the best. That's my favourite subject.

同学：叶缊瑶评论于 2017/1/28 16:27:35: MsZhang要空格，vere是这样写的very。 And monday has PE class.改 And monday i have PE class.

同学：叶缊瑶评论于 2017/1/28 16:27:29: Monday开头要大写，.My favorite subject is English and maths.is改为are。

同学：叶缊瑶评论于 2017/1/28 16:27:07: Hi I'm He Xinhui. I'm 12 yes old.这里的错误请参考前一篇的评论，I learn in Shi Long NO.2 middle school.learn改为study，shilong要连在一起，Middle school 开头要大写，