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My Best Friend

2016级(4)班[毕业] 曾心悦 2017-01-24 15:35 阅读(119) 评论(2) 英语作文
My name is cindy . I am a student in NO.2 moddle school.In  school ,I have a best friend . Her name is Amy . She is tall and fat .She like eat chicken and rice for dinner . Her favorite subject is art .She often draw picture with me.We often play sport and draw picture on weekend .She is my best friend.
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同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/28 16:31:19 
play sport ,sport加上s。on weekend 中间加个the
同学:叶缊瑶 评论于 2017/1/28 16:31:11 
cindy开头要大写,moddle school.Middle应该这样写,还有开头要大写,She like eat的like要加上s,eat要加上ing