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My family

2016级(8)班[毕业] 陈俊颖 2017-02-05 23:12 阅读(252) 评论(1) 英语作文
作文概要:这篇文章主要写了我的家人和我爱我的家。

Hi!I’m Amy.They are five people in my family.My father,my mother,my sister,my brother and me.My father is a businessman.He is 40 years old.My mother is a  housewife.She is 39 years old.My sister is a student.She is 18 years old.My brother is a student.He is 16 years old.I’m a student,too.I love my family.What about you?

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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2017/2/6 7:23:46 
写得不错,介绍得比较全面,若能介绍一下家庭成员的习惯爱好更好。单数可数名词前别忘了加a,My mother is a housewife. My brother is a student.