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My. Favorite subject

2016级（9）班[毕业] 张嘉轩 2017-02-09 16:23 阅读(148) 评论(3) 诗词鉴赏

I have many class in school every day.I like many class.But my favourite is math. Becond i can think many question in math class . I have math class every day.So i am happy enery day. My math teacher is Mrs Chen . She is so clever . I like my math teacher. Becond she teach us many math knowledge . I have an math class at 40 minute. It's interesting for me. So i am very like math

同学：陈鸿评论于 2017/2/10 12:25:01: 第四行的teach要改成第三人称单数的形式，因为she是第三人称。
最后一行“So I am very like math”改成“So I like English very much”

同学：陈鸿评论于 2017/2/10 12:24:27: 第四行的“I have an math class at 40 minute”应改成“I have a math class for 40 minutes”，for表示持续某段时间，at表示在某段时间，"math"的音标开头是辅音，所以不能用“an”

同学：陈鸿评论于 2017/2/10 12:23:36: many是许多的意思，后加可数名词复数。第一行的because错了。i在表示“我”的时候，无论在句中还是句首，都要大写。