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I Hate School Rules

2016级(8)班[毕业] 肖侣胜 2017-07-19 09:21 阅读(125) 评论(2) 英语作文
I am mike.I am a student in No.1 middel school.I hate school rules ,they are terrible,school has too many ruels.Can't run in the hallways and classroom.We can't eat in the classroom.We must be quite in class,we must listent to teacher.We can'fight.School is so boring and terrible
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同学:徐慧 评论于 2017/7/29 17:01:30 
居心叵测,啧啧啧,乱七八糟的 差评。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
同学:徐慧 评论于 2017/7/29 16:48:19 
Mike,主语混乱,什么quite,是quiet好不好,结构混乱,