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My Dear father

2016级(8)班[毕业] 钟递胜 2017-08-04 10:43 阅读(117) 评论(1) 诗词鉴赏
Hello.This is photo of my father.He's name is Mike.It's 40 years old.He's old man.He's work is famer.He have a big farm.It's very beautiful.I like a farm.So I eat fruit every day.
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同学:徐慧 评论于 2017/8/4 10:55:01 
我觉得你要重写,this is a photo....,he is 40 years old,his job is a farmer,I like the...