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2011级(9)班[毕业] 陈嘉莉 2012-02-11 16:57 阅读(255) 评论(3) 英语作文

Hi,I’m Chen Jiali.There is six people in my family.There are my father, my mother, my grandfather,my grandmother,my brother and I.My grandparents are very kind.They usually water the flowers.My father is a boss.He is very busy.And my mother is an accountant.So she is smart.My brother is a pupil.He is a good pupil.His teachers are very like he.This is my family.

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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2012/5/5 21:51:37 
文章总体挺不错
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2012/5/5 21:50:51 
对,还有第二句的There is 和倒数第二句也需要改改
同学:刘婧宇 评论于 2012/4/4 12:00:49 
第四句那里应该是They are而不是There are,改一下吧