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How exercise helps(运动的好处)

2010级(9)班[毕业] 黄康盈 2011-12-03 20:50 阅读(369) 评论(2) 英语作文
   If our bodies are not strong,our spirit to do things will certainly be quite dull.And at the same time,we are lack of energies to study.Diseases will only attack the weak,but not the strong.
   Why are our bodies not strong?Because we do not pay attention to exercise.For this reason,we students must often take different sorts of exercise in the gym.
   Exerxise helps us to strengthen our bodies and avoid disease.It also teaches us cooperation,for most exercise is played by team.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/4 13:16:47 
嘿嘿嘿~~~有些小问题哦~~比如说:exercise作名词的话要用复数啦~~~
不过还是很吃惊呢~~~你们初二的作文都明显比初一搞了一个水准哦~~~加油啦~~