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My good friend

2010级(1)班[毕业] 张梓聪 2011-12-03 21:22 阅读(425) 评论(5) 英语作文
                                               My good frined
       I have a good friend. His name is Mike. He is active and funny.His favourite food is French fries. Because he feels very good. His favourite actor is Jackie Chan. He likes to watch Jackie Chan's movies very much.Because it's great.
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同学:陈美华 评论于 2012/2/26 14:42:57 
Because he feels very good.
应该是Because it tastes very good. 吧?
同学:张梓聪 评论于 2011/12/4 21:57:19 
莫老師...什麼地方有錯誤啊?【指教
同学:柯智文 评论于 2011/12/4 12:36:43 
写得真是太好了,我只能说very  very  good
同学:张梓聪 评论于 2011/12/4 10:39:39 
啊? 沒有+什麼?
【請指教...】
教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/3 22:59:18 
A...没有+
只有一个小错误,看你找不找得到啦~~