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my friend

2011级(1)班[毕业] 廖宇蕾 2011-11-28 16:04 阅读(522) 评论(3) 英语作文
作文概要:主写my friend

     I have a good friend. Her name is Amy .She is a good girl. She is 12. She likes English very much. She likes sports. She has a basketball. She often play the  basketball on the weekend. She likes singing,too. 

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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2011/12/1 9:22:35 
"She often plays  basketball on weekends."
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2011/11/30 23:14:34 
Good compositin! But one mistake with the sentence which should be "She often plays the  basketball on the weekend."
同学:吴倩瑶 评论于 2011/11/29 22:17:04 
句子通畅,但介绍得不是很全面,可以在生活细节或外貌上加以描写,继续加油!