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My favourite sports

2010级(3)班[毕业] 苏永琳 2012-02-12 20:28 阅读(525) 评论(1) 英语作文
Some bady like doing sports when they are free.And they have own favourite sports.My favourite sports is running.
Maybe running is a kind of bored sports for you.But I don't think so.Do you know running is a popular sports in the world? You don't need to buy anything for running.Running can help you be stronger and stronger.You will find you are healthier than before when you running.So I am plan to running for half an hour four times a week.I think I can be more healthy.
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教师:孙淳娴 评论于 2012/2/29 8:18:28 
文章总的来说写得很不错,但有些语法和习惯用法错误。如:some ladies ,They have their own favorite sports; I am planning to run for ...加油!继续努力!