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2011级(7)班[毕业] 李巧怡 2012-02-13 23:22 阅读(276) 评论(1) 英语作文
Mom bought me a pair of skating shoes at my fifth birthday. From then on, I developed the hobby of skating. It not only makes me stronger and stronger, but also helps me know many truths of life. I know that it is normal to fall, and if only you can get on your feet again and keep on moving, you are very good!
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/2/16 23:52:35 
...不要随便用过去时态,因为一看就知道不是你写的...

虽然这篇文章本身是不错的~