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2011级(7)班[毕业] 余恒 2012-02-18 11:46 阅读(265) 评论(4) 英语作文
      
      Hello!I'm Yu Heng.I usually have a busy day. I get up at 8:30 every day. Then I help my parents with the housework. After breakfast,  I do my homework and read some interesting books in the morning. In the afternoon, I visit my  friends and play football with them. In the evening, I and borther watch TV. I  go to bed at 11:00.
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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2012/5/5 21:57:14 
文章写得好,评论意见也非常好!
同学:陈琪琪 评论于 2012/2/25 21:42:56 
I and borther watch TV改成I watch TV with brother好一点...还有是brother,不是borther...注意
同学:余恒 评论于 2012/2/18 22:05:36 
呵呵
同学:王宇霞 评论于 2012/2/18 20:53:43 
用词准确,好!