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狗狗的战争

2011级(8)班[毕业] 陈柱荣 2011-12-04 08:27 阅读(387) 评论(1) 英语作文
作文概要:Dogs of war

Weekend, I went with my mom to go shopping, go to a half, saw a hitherto unknown dogs of war. For his funeral, please listen to me slowly on the

The fighting is the two giant dog, I see at first glance, thought the ugly mastiff! I think: if they stand upright, probably higher than me! One is black, hair hair straight up, looked really makes people tremble with fear in one's boots! Facial expressions are also quite fierce, like his opponent had general. A brown, his mouth wide open, I have seen its sharp and sharp teeth, thinking: if the teeth bite, alas, that would be too sad!

The start of the war! Brown dog first attack, but the chain lock, it can only scream stuff that it badly; black dog is not resigned to playing second fiddle, although the owner hold, but not to hands and feet; brown dog was the last straw, it let out amazing shout; the black dog was frightened, but still don't forget to keep their dignity in the brown dog, a sound, but the sound was much smaller, it is a sign of weakness, brown dog victory.

I'm hanging the heart also finally fell to the ground: a good thriller!

Shilong second month 5 class

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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2011/12/7 22:35:55 
"狗狗的战争"应该是the war between dogs
日记式的作文很好!但注意克服中国式的英语。