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My English Teacher

2011级(2)班[毕业] 叶佩珊 2011-11-28 23:03 阅读(572) 评论(5) 英语作文

  I have an Engish teacher. She is Miss Xie. She has short hair.She is kind. Her favouite colour is white,blue and purple. And she usually goes shopping and surfs the Internet. She likes walking,reading books,swimming,playing ping-pong,watching movies and climbing mountains.Her favourite food is seafood,vegetables and cakes.She likes broccoli very much. She often goes shopping with her friends.She buys many nice clothes and many nice skirts. She often go climbing,because it is healthy. And she usually goes hiking,because she wants to eat much good food.She often goes to movies on weekends. She likes comedies and action movies. But she doesn't like thriller.

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同学:张朝敏 评论于 2011/12/9 22:19:41 

Nicely done 不错

同学:袁静怡 评论于 2011/12/4 23:15:42 
.我知道!她的“Her favourite colour is white,blue and purple "应该用 are.
"Her favourite food is seafood,vegetables and cakes."也是一样.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2011/12/1 9:18:00 
此文词汇比较丰富,能正确运用学过的词汇与句型,谈论熟悉的话题,行文流畅。但文章中仍有少数语法错误,看谁的法眼能够指出来,找对一个奖励1分!
同学:廖宇蕾 评论于 2011/11/30 23:18:17 
 Very good. 要继续哦。
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2011/11/30 23:09:50 
You know your teacher quite well and you made an excellent composition about her. Thank you, child!