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2011级(7)班[毕业] 余恒 2012-04-14 09:34 阅读(257) 评论(1) 英语作文
       I have a good friend. She has long straight black hair. She is very cute! She is of medium height and has a little bit fat. .Her favourite sport is running. She also likes singing and dancing. Her favourite color is red. Her favourite season is summer. Because she can swim. This is my good friend, Yao Linxin.
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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2012/4/26 9:11:31 
学以致用,这篇作文写得很不错!has a little bit fat.有点小错误,同学们说说该如何修改呢?