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2010级（5）班[毕业] 袁应东 2012-04-30 21:50 阅读(242) 评论(2) 英语作文

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Every has his or her hobby,For example , someone likes swimming, someone likes reading , and someone likes sleepping. So my hobby is playing backetball.I have been playing backetball since I was 11 years old . why? Because my dream job is became a backetball player. And I have been NBA on TV for three and a half years .This is my hobby , If you know anyone else who does well in backetball , please tell me. I'd like to study backetball with his(her).Oh~by the way , what 's your hobby?

教师：黄小凤评论于 2012/5/1 14:04:06: Every one has his or her hobby. Because my dream job is becoming a backetball player.

教师：黄小凤评论于 2012/5/1 13:41:46: 能按要求去写，但有个别比较明显的错误。