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2010级(4)班[毕业] 张耀彬 2011-12-04 11:55 阅读(321) 评论(2) 英语作文
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Hello ! My name is zhang yao bin ,I'm a boy. I like eat apples bananas and Oranges. I like play computer games.I'm a medium height
.I have big eyes,A big nose and a small mouth.My math is very good and I good at phycics.I'm 13 years old.I like read books.I in my father car  to school.

    This is me.Do you like me?

 

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同学:程相宜 评论于 2011/12/4 15:45:32 
zhang yao bin名字开头字母要大写,I like eat apples bananas 中间不用加and的么?Oranges也不用大写。I like play computer 动词要加ing。I'm a medium height
应该是I have...I good at phycics中间要加be 动词。I like read books动词要加ing。I in my father car  to school完全错误。。。