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A letter to my neigher(给邻居的一封信)

2010级(5)班[毕业] 袁应东 2012-05-05 23:40 阅读(263) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:邻居太吵!投诉信~
Dear Mr and Mrs Harris,
            Welcome to our neighborhood(邻居).You must be excited to be in a new house .However,Would you mind turning down the music? It's so loudly.
I think you play the guitar and sing very will, but it's alse too loudly.I don't mind you talk on the phone too loudly, but I can't stand you throw litter out of the window,It's very dangerous! I ever want to fight with you! but I won't to do that. And I'm don't like the dog, So could you piease don't play the football with dog?  I hope that you can cooperate.(合作)
                                                                                 Yours sincerely,
                                                                                 YuanYingdong.
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教师:黄小凤 评论于 2012/5/8 10:35:43 
作文内容很好,只是有比较多的语法和拼写错误。
同学:袁应东 评论于 2012/5/5 23:41:11