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2010级(11)班[毕业] 覃俊达 2012-05-06 15:34 阅读(215) 评论(1) 英语作文
   We are very welcome you to come to this beauitful district.But,you do something unpleasant.First,we are very appreciate to sounds you the sound of Heaven,and we always don't sleep to sound your song.Second,your wife has a long telephone porridge,it excited for us to know something about you.Thirst,Does your son always plays football with David Beckham?We hope you don't do it anymore,if you do,your home will have many snakes.
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教师:黄小凤 评论于 2012/5/8 10:54:06 
虽然你的想法很好,但用英语表达得不是那么准确。我希望你多写作。加强语法方面的练习。