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A letter to my neighbors

2010级(12)班[毕业] 邓莹 2012-05-06 18:07 阅读(227) 评论(1) 英语作文
Dear Mr and Mrs Harris,
  Welcome to our neighborhood.You must be excitd to be in a nem house.However,would you mind not throw litter out of the window?If you do, the garden will be very dirty And it's dangerous.Would you mind not turning down the music ?Because is too loudly.Could you please not play the guitar and sing too loudly?I think you sings well,but its too loudly.Could you please not play football in the room.You can play in the garden or park.And the last one.Could you pease keep your voice down?Finall,I hope you will have a great time!
                                                                                                         Yours sincerely
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教师:黄小凤 评论于 2012/5/9 19:48:31 
内容好,但有个别的语法错误,自己去发现改正吧。