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2011级(1)班[毕业] 李彤 2012-05-19 20:49 阅读(312) 评论(1) 我的作文

 My name is Li Tong.I have a pen pal.His name is Ben.His comes from Canada.He is thirteen.He studies in a middle school.His favourite subjet is math.He likes planging basketball.He has 30 classmate.He is good at history.He wants konw more about China.We are good friends.

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同学:游诗琪 评论于 2012/5/26 15:54:08 
   有些单词打错了吧,例如“His comes from Canada."中的"His",还有"He likes planging basketball"中的"planging",希望写完一篇作文后能认真检查。