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My good friend

2011级(5)班[毕业] 傅纪钧 2011-12-04 13:09 阅读(328) 评论(5) 英语作文
   I have tree good friends.They are Kelly,Agility and Chen Yanjun.We are 13,too.We likes playing basketball.Chen Yanjun also likes running,Because she runs fast.Kelly and Agility are also likes dancing and singing,Because they are dance and sing is well.We are so happy!  
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同学:莫莫 评论于 2011/12/4 13:24:18 
唉...就是Kelly and Agility also like dancing and singing...这里不用加are,而且也不能加三单咯...
同学:柯智文 评论于 2011/12/4 13:20:29 
写得真是太好了,我只能说very  very  good
同学:傅纪钧 评论于 2011/12/4 13:17:26 
老师说清楚一点在哪
教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/4 13:12:59 
... 还是be动词和v.动词的重复使用问题啊~~~
作者回复:哦!谢谢老师