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2011级（8）班[毕业] 刘远满 2012-05-25 18:39 阅读(342) 评论(2) 英语作文

well.I like tail shoes. Because they talk interesting and funny. Ilike the cartoons, too. the cartoons talkfunny. but I don't like sports show. Because they talk boring and I can't stand them. Idon't like the weather, too. It was awfui and I can't stand them too.

同学：朱依利评论于 2012/7/25 13:44:41: Well, I like talk shows. Because they are interesting and funny. I like cartoons, too.Because they are funny. But I don't like sports shows. Because they are boring. I can't stand them! I don't like the weather report, either. It is awful.

教师：莫然评论于 2012/5/25 22:05:35: 第一句：I like talk shows...实在是单词拼错得有点厉害啊...
后面也不少错误呢...

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