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My  last  weekend

2011级(2)班[毕业] 容子婷 2012-06-02 22:40 阅读(234) 评论(1) 英语作文
    How  was your last weekend?  Was it fun or bad?
    But  my last weekend was fun.  I spent Saturday doing homework. On Sunday, I went shopping with my mom. We bought some food and many clothers. Then we went to the park, and had fun in the park.
    Last weekend was great! I like it.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/6/3 8:38:05 
第一行的Was is fun or bad? 用的非常好~~~支持~~

不过...第二段开头的but...应该用语气词“Well,...”吧?