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A Sunday Moring

2011级（11）班[毕业] 钟炳荣 2012-06-05 18:18 阅读(220) 评论(2) 英语作文

作文概要：假期作文之二

On Sunday moring.I went to the park.There were three boys playing soccer.There were two children play tennis.A family are under the tree.Some people were talk.Others were play.What I did do?I were listened to music on the chair.

教师：刘焕媚评论于 2012/6/7 20:42:48: There were three boys playing soccer.
作者回复：谢谢老师O(∩_∩)O，已经修改，请老师查看。