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2011级(8)班[毕业] 姚诗泳 2012-06-20 16:19 阅读(238) 评论(2) 英语作文
Near my there are flowers . Inmy turn right go straigh on a biue fieid . My house is in front of a tall building .
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/6/20 16:47:58 
Near my home, there are many flowers.
If you turn right and go straight from our school, you can see my house in front of a tall building.
这是我能想到的最好的修改了...自己好好看看吧...
教师:莫然 评论于 2012/6/20 16:41:26 
... ...还有很多地方需要修改喔...